Brea H
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i cant get through the first few pages. it's as if the author is skipping around when trying to describe things. I absolutely love to read and have probably read at least 1000 books, so far, if not more and I've been frustrated by authors who had abhorrent writing language, usually it's too simplistic and repetitious. but, in this case, it's as if they've thrown together a bunch of made up words along with elaborate words to try to make it seem complicated or more interesting however, it just causes it to seem over done. the pace is far too fast even in the first pages, the names are over kill, stick to something that I wont mind reading repeatedly and rolls off of the tongue instead of something that will likely be mispronounced. you dont know if your main character is female or male because the author doesnt say in the beginning which is a pretty crucial detail, whether you find out later or not doesn't matter, you should automatically know in the beginning. dont think I'll finish.
Ens K
The writing does draw you in: intricate worldbuilding, dangerous gods, parallels to white supremacy, interesting narration & a unique/quirky/non-Mary Sue lead. After the halfway point however, I'm not sure what happened --seemed that things were resolved too quickly & the protagonist fell in love/lust just for the sake of the plot.
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Pinky Paws
It wasn't all that great. The main character wasn't developed as well as she could've been. Don't know why it's called the hundred thousand kingdoms when it's not even focused on that. It's slow paced and by the end, I didn't feel like there was anything happening. There were things in the book that were mentioned that could've been really interesting but is ignored.