Ryan Malone
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The series is good, though slow, and having read the Commonwealth books already, simply not up to the level I hoped for. Also, having read those, this series is comprised of early versions of all his same ideas, with the exception of the central plot premise. Everything else, all of his sci-fi ideas, are echoes of more fleshed out ideas from Commonwealth (with the exception of Edenism, which is better by far than the Commonwealth analog). And since the main plot is slow to start and kinda lame, it's a good thing he writes good characters. But the real killer is the formatting in the ebooks. It's just horrible. At first I thought it was bad writing, because entire section breaks are missing, leading to changing POV characters in one page, and even in paragraphs. It makes it very hard to get into when you constantly need to pause and restructure what is on the screen into something that makes sense. This series is probably the worst I've read in that regard, and considering this is not Hamilton's best work, I can't recommend spending money on it, at least in this format.
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