Too many dead ends Writing is on par with the others but there are too many dead ends that come from picking the wrong random choice half the book ago. That would be OK if it telegraphed consequences better but often it's just pick one of 4 doors, you pick wrong you die, in 20 pages time.
Too short I like the concept of a story unfolding differently depending on the choices you make, but the story doesn't last very long.
Orgon organs I hate the orgon. That is all.
more like the original fighting fantasys The first 2 GAs i read (1 and 8) were quite easy to finish,Ii couldn't find any dead ends other than your vitality getting too low and the fights were quite easy as you were more powerful than most of your opponents. This 1 however is different, just like the old ffs, little story other than seek and kill the necromancer in a dungeon. shorter paragraphs, with lots of twists and turns and some tricky fights, i've also found 2 dead ends so far, 1 from making a bad decision and one from failing a fitness check. a great challenge. this is probably my favorite so far.
Bravo Just great
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