Sheer Brilliance! This game has a certain charm that ranks it in my top five. Thank you, Dravic, for this wonderful game! For too long have I looked for a decent magic game, and now I've found it! Your touching prologue has helped reinforce my confidence to persue an artistic career! As soon as I'm able, I'll most certainly become a Mighty Supporter. I wish you well in your future projects! My only complaint is some very minor flaws in sentence structure. However, these flaws are so minor that they're barely noticeable.

For what it is, I really enjoyed this game. The grammar is not quite there yet, but it's pretty good from a non primary English speaker. I wish there was more of it, but it's pretty complete considering. Might be good to have some more end game power items, and a way to make decent money after everything's been looked, maybe via your estate or have randomly findable loot. More places to explore or hidden sidequests? Maybe something involving the love life that your dad keeps hinting at? ;)

It is a good game I can not say otherwise. But the full version feels a bit "hollow". Because I completed every sidequest before buying the full version, the only thing it really added was "just" the main storyline. And it was great, but I was looking forward to some more sidequests. The ending on the other hand feels a bit forced, and I would really like to read the prologue again (sometime that isn't 3 am) if possible and explore it in greater detail, not just finish it with a few paragraphs of text.

Just WOW I love games like this. The story was great and the abilities impeccable. But like all other games like this I find only one flaw. After finishing the main story your allowed to continue on but nothing to occupy your time or challenge you. Maybe allow us to start over with our current lvl but on a harder difficulty. Possibly add other intense plots as well. I Love it hahaha I just want more.

I really enjoyed this game. Though short, i had a great time following the story and leveling up my little mage. The world is immersive, missions are challenging but not overly difficult, spells are interesting and presented in a unique way, and the story is engaging. I really like the timer thing, too; very unique and gives a real-time feel that immerses you in the game more. A shame it was too short, but i look forward to more improvements from the developer! I would really like to explore the world more and get to see how the story will play out. Good luck, developer!

I like the game and would consider the full version after the developer has implemented the changes he promised in the reviews, but it's been 6 months and no updates yet. EDIT: Thank you for replying, I'm looking forward to the changes! May you find some balance and happiness in your life again!

Fix save game issue please The game was great, but I can't play it because I need to start all over again every time when I close the game, don't tell me to clean cache and doing hard reset because that won't work, the problem is yours, please, fix this soon as possible bc I wanna enjoy this amazing game. I loved that intro letter, and gratz, you're a good developer if you did it all alone, I'm really impressed.. I wish I could be like you! Thank you.

It was iight Kinda railroady in most parts; not enough options. I played the trial but that shouldn't matter, tbh. Maybe add more interactive responses, even if they're just BS filler options. The illusion of choice needs to be much stronger here. Also, let players go back to sidequest areas, even if there's nothing left to do at them - just feels really railroady when you can't return to an area. Lastly, and this isn't to do with rating, but nobody in the game seemed too hung up about the mother's death... o_0

This is a wonderful game and I can see myself spending many hours playing through it. I have one complaint that keeps me from giving this game full marks, however, and that's with the grammar. A text-based game lives and dies by its text, and the text here reads like it's been weakly translated into English. Please get somebody to proofread this!

Wizardly adventure Lots of story, 'facts of the world history' told as myth, legend and through victor and vanquished. I finished it twice yesterday just so I could make some other choices and see what they wrought for the world. I am pleased to hear plans for expansion and will eagerly await more. The author of the tale seeks to make a career of making games and is in my opinion off to a fine start

Had a lot of fun with this game! Though I wish there was more things to do end game. This game has also inspired me to create a text game myself after playing this! Though, I'll have to make it in my free time between work, but I'd still like to give this a shot! Great game and can't wait to see more from you in the future!

This was great could hardly put it down. Got full game because I would love to see more from you. I do have to say that you need to work on proof reading your work as there are some errors. Furthermore the controls are great but always having to switch the selected inspiration type from basic to advanced when targeting new or the same enemy was annoying and maybe mesh that system better. Thank you!

Can't save. See "EDIT". It seems to be a great game but I cannot go beyond the beginning without having to restart the whole game again. When exciting to the main menu it does save, but if I exit the app and close it completely the save dissappear. EDIT: I just learned what happen. I thought that the hut or the outside was a special location where the game was suppose to save by itself. I slept on the bed and now it works.

I killed hours of my freetime with this and I don't regret it. Fantastic game! I just wish there would be more quests and perhaps a more enemies to grind later in the game. I wanted to level up twice to get 100+ willpower for the dragon, but the spiders gave so little xp and harpies kept killing me. I also feel like all the inspirations are useless except for the Unique ones.

Great game so far. Bought the two cheap in-game purchases for you. A few suggestions - 1. Fix a few typos (more like just two typos, sorry for nitpicking) 2. I get the minimalistic approach but frames around the text box (or even just a small pic in a corner) would help with the mythbuilding just to identify and differentiate each object, place, or interaction.

This game was great but I have a question. I'm thinking about replaying, and I wanted to know if there's any to get a love interest in this game. Just cuz there's a part where the dad says my house is empty and he wants grandkids. It's just something I'm wondering for my next playthrough.

Please add save button Great game, nice concept and pace. But unfortunately it lacks option to save. To be a while-you-wait type of game, this is gravely needed, because you never know when to stop and don't want to loose your progress. Oh, and also better interface would be nice. I'm looking forward to the updates

I've been searching for a game I would love for a while and when it comes to it I'm very picky. This game is amazing and I enjoyed it and finished it over a few times I wish there were more items and maybe even alternative story lines to improve replay ability. All in all the game is amazing and I love how imagination has its play, and as I've seen other say it would be great to have a little bit more as far as side quests. Thank you for the amazing game IncogitableZ.

Wow The introduction really hit me, your life story is interesting. Cant say if you made right decision not going to college but you definatelly followed your dreams and done it right. Love the game, as soon as i finish tutorial, buying full game. Good job and good luck with your one man development ;)

Fantastic Occasionally the text gets messed up, but other than that this game is fantastic. I wish I could've done more before just being forced to end the game. I love that I could grind as much as I liked before doing anything story related. I can't wait to see more from this creator.

Enjoyed it but ending was a let down to me. But was very enjoyable otherwise just needs a bit more depth and make me care about the story rather than doing it for the sake of exp. Maybe difficulty tiers as well. But as I said very enjoyable worth the buy

The game was alright, after i finished all the sidequest (or at least I think I did) I went back to pinning forest and talked to dear old dad. He mentioned something about finding someone worthy of love. I have a small feeling this might be a future quest of somekind. But other then that the gameplay and smooth and easy to understand onece I found a easy grind spot (Aka harpy nest and chain lighting spam :P) I can't wait to see what else you make

Good game! The story gets me hooked and the interactions are good. I got a glitch on the texts at one point and I have a screenshot but i don't know where to send it. I'm using a Samsung Galaxy Tab A and encountered the glitch after using a ration.

It's a good game EDIT I love the game but like me who is in another country 1 us dollars are like our 5 dollers. So my parents won't allow me to buy the full game but the trial was fun. Edit: I'm from Malaysia

Ten out of ten across the board. Will definitely buy the full version. Are you going to keep working on this or will you move on to another project soon. I would love to see more of this game.

I really enjoy the hours i took to play the whole thing. I've unlocked everything and finished the game multiple times just to try every magic existed. I really hope for longer story, perhaps another crisis after the end. Anyway, thanks for giving me hours of enjoyment

First off, I genuinely liked, if not loved the game. I elected to play it instead of be productive for hours, had to tell someone to hold my phone. But I don't know if it was just my device, but I think there is a few small bugs, that I found. There were times the text would become pure symbols (illegible) after scrolling or a certain amount of time and the touch doesn't always work , there were a few times I would have to press several times. Of course neither of these ruined my experience. Lastly just a couple comments for you to take however you like, I didn't feel the timers were necessary, they added a uniqueness to the experience but it imo hurt navigates around, like you would be in the capital, then take 5 sec to go to the south cross, 10 to go to the north, 5 to go to the monastery, 5 to enter, 5 to get to the next part, 5 to get to the upper part, 5 to get to the ascendant, then repeat backwards and it felt a little redundant in that situation. Second comment is me telling you of an exploit, once someone is strong enough to clear a harpy nest, it became extremely exploitable for exp, especially with drain life + chain lightning, you can sit there and easily rise to a point that the rest of the game is little more than child's play. I don't know if it's intended but the ending fights were definitely levels beneath me, and I embassed everyone. I had a ton of mana and could spam even the most powerful spells and finish a fight without getting though half of my mana.

I like the concept of this game a lot. Truly. You're a man who discovers his magical aptitude and is then able to travel somewhat freely, gaining new spells in schools of your choosing. I really like the ability to pick your own spells. I even bought the full version. However as a designer, writer, gamer, and woman (oh god) I see many many things that could be improved. Moving around the world is tedious, as is moving around your inventory. The font, font size, and overall colouring is displeasing. Anytime creative writing is involved things are shallow, and oh god the tropes and sexism are there. I still like this game though, I do. Because I think there's great potential for improvement.

I enjoyed this game and found myself a bit sad when it ended. I really hope you add more content into the game such as more place to go(Far Lands,Void etc) and maby a few more inspections like blood,darkness and light. Maby even fight the gods that abandon them. Maby allow us to become a Lich lol. After reading the little letter I bought the game and the two options to help support a little bit. Great game and am looking forward to more.

HI so I commented a long time ago after I bought and beat this game my problem is i got a new phone! So is there any way to get my saved game back?

Finished I finished the main story too quickly, and now after continuing the game, I don't know what to do now.. I've talked to everyone and I can't find any more missions.. Is this game ment to stop continuing or what? I don't want to start over again since I like how I leveled up my character.

Issue fixed but I'm confused Thanks for telling me how to fix the issue. Great game so far. What does mighty supporter IAP and remove wait IAP do?

For a text Adventure, it's quite incredible in my opinion. And here's why. Upon starting the Adventure, I was placed into a fantasy based on an alternative reality. I got a good feel for the world right away. I didn't even know I was introduced until I thought about it, it was so smooth. And by then, I was already a hero who had been fighting constant waves of harpies with over 400 Willpower. And while the magic was interesting and had a unique concept, many of the spells were repetitive. Unfortunately, this is the word limit, but I'd like to give a full review in some way.

I fell completely in love with this game, it's phenomenal. There were 2 things I noticed glitch wise, sometimes I'd have to tap a selection multiple times for it to work, and there would be times certain text was jumbled up into unrecognizable characters. Otherwise this is one of my top favorite interactive stories!

An abolutely brilliant game I got intrigued by this game especially after reading your story and thought id give it a shot. But before i knew it i had finished the free section of the game and i just had to know what happened next. Without hesitating, i just purchased it and damn what a good game. Congrats dude! Pretty damn good game. Oh and dont worry about the auto save feature that people seem to be complaining about, i found it quite useful. Its just the dumb people who struggle arent smart enough and see the white auto save bar.

Hey Dravic, you have done a good job, Thanks heaps for the game and your hard work. I want to tell you what I missed when playing, I hope this helps u too improve ur future games! 1. Make spells do more than just doing damage, example tangle spells should make weaker enemies from moving 2. Bright colors doesn't give ur game rich look, may be think about using different symbols instead different colors for different spells 3. Logo can be a more attractive one.... Thanks again.. you have me as a one more addition to your fanclub now!

Very intriguing story, fun game play. Wish there was a bit more to the full version, but I played most of the game (without realizing it) before I bought it. I'll probably just reset and play again.

No bad.... The game actually gave me a new experience in text based rpgs, without using over the - top graphics or animations. However it buckles under its own ambitions due to the hollowness of the main story.

Loved it It is a great mobile game that a enjoyed playing alot, the main story and sides quests were fun and mechanics all in all well rounded. The message at the fist launch however got me worried abit friend, don't chase your dreams before having a fail safe, my family has always told me to be smart about my aspirations, and that's why I suggest that you go to university before making any big decisons. Just some stangers thoughts on your life choises

Could get better I can click on something to do many times and it wount work... i know some have a timer on but the ones who dont like attacking sometimes it takes me around 5 mins for the thing to let me attack... if could get it register better when you click on something would make it 5 stares