Good It has interesting story that is very well told. Also user interface is good too. I have few qualms though. There is no continue, also this app can't be moved to sd card, which I don't understand why it shouldn't be possible since it is simply a game app.
Poor There are lots of stories but you can't choose what to read straight off - only the first one is available. Wouldn't mind but I find it painfully dull and would like to read one of the others instead. There are 2 spelling errors on the first page of the first story. There's no save / continue bookmarking. I love chip tunes but this music is awful, at least there is the option to switch it off.
Cyberpunk/Choose your adventure I love the genre. Wish I could play the other stories too. Hoping for great things. Great work
Story-driven, Choose-Your-Own Style with Great Soundtrack! I'm still exploring this adventure fully, but already my commendations to those who did the music! Great work! The game _is_ story-driven, choose-your own, and full of words (tl;dr, folks?). So far I'm enjoying it!
Good Game too short, cant save progress, needless spelling mistakes. But game is intrstng and has atmosphere...
Unfinished, not well executed This has some potential but it is not well done. Only one of the stories works.
+ Open Hand: Editing, tweaks.
+ Removed a few more excessive files, trimming the size.
+ Removed SysOver.
+ You can't see me say this, but: Making this available to older versions, down to 2.0!
+ Scaling GUI for all phone screen sizes!
+ Parallax backgrounds! Animated sprites!
+ Better (visual) feedback on using/requiring assets!
+ More stories! Art! Intrigue!