Good so far So far it's interesting, with mystery and fairly decent visuals. Would be nice to see more emotional range in faces (they always look kinda angry to me?) but otherwise good. Definitely interested in the final piece and once the proofreader's gotten to it the reading will be nice and fluid. Also like the options in the settings, nice amount of flexibility there. Will there be a chance to save in the full version?
Pretty good for a demo. Interesting story. The story is really interesting so far and the background pictures are beautiful. The two characters have cute designs, too. The only major issue I see is the grammar. While I was able to understand everything that was happening, I did have to read over some things more slowly. I see in the description that it has not been proofread, yet, so the grammar has not affected my rating of this app. I'm looking forward to the full version!
Awesome A really awesome novel! Though, I think you could've at least put a "To Be Continued" at the end. I thought I broke the game or something, hahaha. Will be looking forward to the next one. Oh, and the grammar is a little off. That could use a little bit of tweaking too.
Looking forward to the Finished😊 💖It was a good story, as you said it still needs proof reading. It is not really bad just some tenses, ect are off. So it is a bit choppy to read. I also look forward to a few more options. So far I only got to choice to take a bath or eat breakfast. I do like how it said that did not affect the outcome. Awesome that you respond to everyone's comments. I am running out of space on my Samsung Galaxy s5, so need to delete it for now. Please let me know when more comes out. I will buy it. Michelle
Has Potential... I've really been looking for good visual novels and even though this is only a demo,I have to say that it's really good and would like to read the entire thing if I can find it. You just need to fix some of the grammar and make it better with Ren'Py engine.I also heard that you need someone to proofread and I would be interested in doing so before you release the final version
Only at the beginning still but so far it's really interesting. As others have said there are some grammar issues but that's easily fixed. It's also a little annoying that I have to tap twice to move onto the next text but, I don't know, that could just be a glitch on my end. Overall good game!
1. Added new sprites and expressions
2. Slightly modified interface for textbox, NVL box, and backlog
3. Added "reset to default" option on configuration
p.s : The CG and music gallery is still inaccessible until the full version
An interactive story in which you meet a mysterious girl on the moonlit beach.