The story itself is Ok, however I was disappointed with the fact that there are Very few chances to "control" the story based on "choices" we as readers make. This is just a long drawn-out story. Even the romantic interests are not much to be excited about because there is no real interaction between the main character and the males of the story. So unfortunately I was not very impressed with it. 98% of what you are doing is just reading, There is almost 0% of actual gameplay.
I think it's really cool. I like how you have visual representations of the characters, but how the story makes you use your imagination more than anything. The only drawn character look I didn't like was lily's character look. On another note the plot is superb, like a soap opera, but not the Spanish kind.
Loving this story so far! I also played the winter break. I don't know why but is it possible to have a route for the protagonist and Jacob? I'm a bit curious about him in the first place. Hahava. Hope they have a romantic route too. 😄 Edit: Jacob route please!
It's got good story elements, and I love the LGBT+ inclusion. However, there are some things I think could be improved upon. Firstly, Jacobs suicide attempt and Sophia's kidnapping would feel more substantial if it explored mental illness more. Secondly, a save slot and load feature would be great for someone who wishes to do multiple routes at the same time. Thirdly, I think questions that don't really affect what happens should either gain an effect, or be scrapped for more options that do affect the story in some way. Fourthly, I think certain routes should be more...Cleanly made. As in, I feel creepy knowing that to get love with Isaac, Anna, Lily, and other similar characters, that you have to make a move when they are clearly vulnerable. My last issue is the use of lol and smiley faces in the text. It doesn't do much for immersion, and I think if a laugh or face needed to be expressed, narrating that the character is laughing, winking, joking, etc would be much more affective. Though it's probably too hard, I don't know much about game design, being able to customize your characters look would be cool in my opinion.
This game is the greatest ever!!!! One suggestion that would make this game better is if spring break and winter break were one with the original. Keep up the great work and amazing story. Love the game. 😍😍 It's just hard to wait for new chapters to come out.
I want to have the option to interact with Jacob more. I thought if you hanged with Isaac you would get more chances meeting Jacob but you don't.
Chapter 32 "Midterm" is now available!
- Fixed Various Spelling & Grammar issues
- Polished System up a bit or a byte.
- System improvements
In this court intrigue, will you find true love, gain a crown or lose your head?