Conflicted love Im not a fan of zombies but i do LOVE this story XD The characters back and forth jokes are very natural feeling and i love the all the characters but most of all Johnny because come on katanas will always be epically cool lol. I hope you get a chance to write the third arc, no matter how long it takes.
I'll give 3 stars, for now. . because the idea is amazing. Plus I love 'which-way' books. I mean no offense when I say, the grammar is atrocious. The story seems too short in ways & lacks in certain detail as well. Please take this as constructive critisism. Other than that, thus far, are my only opinions. I honestly feel you have a strong foundation to start building off of with this. Yet as I said, proof read and spell check is a must & more detail. Draw the readers in to where it's like you are painting a vivid image in our minds. Because, since I am being honest, I got bored a few times.
Good Idea, Poor Execution This story is nearly unreadable. It has the appearance of being rushed to completion to meet deadlines because no one proofread any of the content. That's a huge issue considering it's a text-based game. Grammar and spelling errors abound, but that's not where it ends. Many sentences are almost indecipherable due to lack of description or flaws in structure. The content of the sentences is bland and nondescript as well. Overall, I commend the idea for it's potential, but this screams, "minimal effort."
Decent, poor grammar. Good concept, I'm a big fan of zombies so I liked this straight away. The only thing that is annoying is the spelling and grammar. It feels rushed and that it hasn't had a proof read at all. Fix the pretty often spelling and grammar mistakes, add some illustrations and you got yourself a winner.
Make zombie chronicles 3 AMAZING OH MY GOSH Please make the next one please that is amazing oh my gosh if I could I would rate it 1 million stars or more that is a really good adventure book basically
Great story Great story. Everything felt natural. I would have no issue giving it more stars. I would like more proff reading though. A few mistakes are never that bad but it did seem it it was a little rushed. Greatness that's time. I don't mind waiting so if you guys do make a third one which I hope you do please take time to make sure the text is straight before you release. Thank you again for this read I hope you guys keep it going.
- fixed few issues
Hunters Zombie: Apocalypse is a free online role-playing game for fans of zombie theme.