I loved this so much! You dont come across stories like this very often. Let alone a yuri one. So, I had a lot of fun reading this! It has such a good story and the images just made it even better! I really hope you come up with a sequel for this! I would love to see their love develop over time, how they go about baring children, and how they face the upcoming war. I really enjoyed this overall!
Great Yuri Love I really enjoyed. The story was interesting and the steamy scene really had me going. I would love to see a sequel about the growth and development of their love, the child, and the oncoming war. Yuri mech anyone? I think this would also make a fine anime. My one complaint is that i would have liked to see the time they shared in that week. But good stuff overall
The visuals are okay, maybe even kind of good. But it really is just a short yuri visual novel - no interactive, CYOA aspect, short, and a very abrupt ending. It doesn't help that some parts of the storytelling and characterizations are downright silly, weird, and laughable, especially for an adult like me. The main character doesn't even act her age at all. She's so juvenile it's hard to suspend disbelief. Too bad because the initial concept and visuals actually had a potential.
I loved it. My favorite part was the line "It IS just a theory." I dunno if you guys made it intentional or not, but I honestly felt reading that line then saying "A game theory". It's moments like that in a story or show or movie that you can really get a kick out of it.
Fantastic, but left me somewhat unsatisfied Sure, I can find basically no faults with this game, but I wouldn't be doing anyone a service if I overlooked just how short the game felt. There is so much room for further character and story development that it almost feels like lost potential. I'm not saying this ruins my feelings for it entirely, but it certainly doesn't make me want to praise it any more than it deserves.
Amazing This was rather amazing and I believe that it has alot of potential. Have your team get together and write a few chapters and you have a heartful story between these two. I see this game even being able to be played for a few hours straight. All I request is a little more dedication