A bittersweet story♥ :') I usually don't rate&review but l must say this is my first kinetic novel l've ever enjoyed reading! Its so sweet&short which could bring a tear at the ending. I hope to see more stories:) Keep writing!*^▁^*
Borderline good It isn't the greatest story but it isn't the worst. The art looks great but I wanted more of the story. I believe more effort could had went in making the story longer. The story has a great lesson to be learned that I haven't caught on by reading but that is my fault. The music is beautiful and pleasant. Is this recommendable .... yes, to those who like a pleasant short story but not for those who want a good read.
Excellent!! Gentle, soft and delicate. The story gives out a relaxing kind of vibe. The art was not the best but it is still nice and the BGM was simply wonderful! Although it is resentful for being a little too short.
A beautiful story. The kid Davis told his story to could be Rachel's student. But stories don't have to have a good ending. Or an ending at all, for that matter. Thank you for making this!
Umm That, was just sad. Okay yes it makes you think twice so that later in life you dont have to say "what if?" But i mean it really had no meaning honesty... that was just.. wow..
Short and sweet The writing in here is very nice. I can also appreciate the soft art and great bgm work. It's a pleasant story that carries a relatable situation and a good lesson. Good work !