A bittersweet story♥ :') I usually don't rate&review but l must say this is my first kinetic novel l've ever enjoyed reading! Its so sweet&short which could bring a tear at the ending. I hope to see more stories:) Keep writing!*^▁^*
Borderline good It isn't the greatest story but it isn't the worst. The art looks great but I wanted more of the story. I believe more effort could had went in making the story longer. The story has a great lesson to be learned that I haven't caught on by reading but that is my fault. The music is beautiful and pleasant. Is this recommendable .... yes, to those who like a pleasant short story but not for those who want a good read.
Excellent!! Gentle, soft and delicate. The story gives out a relaxing kind of vibe. The art was not the best but it is still nice and the BGM was simply wonderful! Although it is resentful for being a little too short.
A beautiful story. The kid Davis told his story to could be Rachel's student. But stories don't have to have a good ending. Or an ending at all, for that matter. Thank you for making this!
Nice Although there were not many actions, I LOVE IT. It's only like your reading an ebook :) makes me always cry, it's not like TOO emotional. So makes me give this short story 5 stars :)
Umm That, was just sad. Okay yes it makes you think twice so that later in life you dont have to say "what if?" But i mean it really had no meaning honesty... that was just.. wow..