Good start Its good I have the droidx and I am very happy that someone is paving the way for more indepth visual novels to come to a phone. Can't wait for more.
It's ok. Not worth you time to keep on your phone and take up space though. The story is MUCH MUCH too short but other then that it's just like any other visual novel
Keyword:TEST My god, people! It says TEST. When you build a car and take it on a quick test run would you immediately go across the US with it? Of course the story is short, it's the TEST story used in the Ren'Py engine being ported to this one as a means to TEST the stability of the engine he's building which he uploaded here for feedback. It's good, by the way.
Samsung Galaxy S3 how short, but i really like the way people working hard to make VN available for Android. Keep your work, i am looking forward to it
Short and mistakes. There is some spelling mistakes.Read it carefully over again.
Fighting! ^^ The drawing is nice but the story is really short and doesn't has that much of a plot. Hope you'll continue making more visual novels :D
Adding saving and loading options. Also a restart novel option. Just press the menu key to open the game menu.