Second novel i downloaded from you guys and i can say they were fine. Even tho both were quite short for me and not much was happening, i think you do it well. Im used to cyoa from delight games which are way longer and have a lot of stuff happening, so that can be problem with me. Overall, i rated 4* since i liked writing style, but maybe your future stories needs more spice ;)
Interesting, but riddled with problems. Let me start off with saying that this IS NOT terrible. It had its moments where it did hold my interest. And yes, I read the description BEFORE I installed the app. And yes, I am fully aware that this was a translation from Spanish to English. I applaud you all for the effort. But my problem with the VN is that there is a whole lot of telling, and not much showing. There were some nice pictures that helped, but not what it could have been. All in all, it's a solid 3/5
I honestly expected this to be something I could read to kill time; just a normal story. Then I finished the game's real ending and shed a few tears. I applaud your creativity. I'll definitely recommend this in my upcoming Top 10 Mobile Games video on my YouTube channel, The Maceinator. You all deserve it.
Loved it Loved it! I was not a big fan of these things (until now i supose) but I just loved it. It would be very nice if there was a sequel but I doubt there would be becouse there are multiple endings (one specific one (obviuosly the last one) could be chosen though)(there could be also other things like the developers not wanting or hard to think of a story...)
Tears were shed Omg I'm a guy with strong feelings, but this novel made me cry. The ending where they both finally rest in peace and the one where they come back to Axel's school made me shed tears. Loved really hope you make another novel similar to this one.
I absolutely loved the final ending I hope it get made into a story or even continued. I also cried at the same endings Naruto Padron did, the the school and the mutual death. I was also intrigued with the darker endings such as the town death ending. All in all hope maybe for a sequel or a novel of this
Reduction of the app in approximately 50 mb
Some corrections to the English translation
Thanks to Logan who helped us in correcting