Second novel i downloaded from you guys and i can say they were fine. Even tho both were quite short for me and not much was happening, i think you do it well. Im used to cyoa from delight games which are way longer and have a lot of stuff happening, so that can be problem with me. Overall, i rated 4* since i liked writing style, but maybe your future stories needs more spice ;)
I have unlocked all but one ending and feel that this game was indeed a good one!! I've played a couple of visual novels and this one I would rank in the middle. I love that it is compatible with my phone as for some reason I couldn't download it off of steam from my computer. One criticism though is that there were hardly any visuals as in the characters were not always present or in view when speaking. Other than that it was great!!
Interesting, but riddled with problems. Let me start off with saying that this IS NOT terrible. It had its moments where it did hold my interest. And yes, I read the description BEFORE I installed the app. And yes, I am fully aware that this was a translation from Spanish to English. I applaud you all for the effort. But my problem with the VN is that there is a whole lot of telling, and not much showing. There were some nice pictures that helped, but not what it could have been. All in all, it's a solid 3/5
I honestly expected this to be something I could read to kill time; just a normal story. Then I finished the game's real ending and shed a few tears. I applaud your creativity. I'll definitely recommend this in my upcoming Top 10 Mobile Games video on my YouTube channel, The Maceinator. You all deserve it.
Great Visual Novel, the art style, the grammer and even the diverging path options were all fantastic. The controls were alittle off screen for mobile but didnt take away from the experience at all. Only real downside is no happy couple comes out of the story but that's just my bias opinion :3 please don't take to heart as it was overall a great VN.
Tears were shed Omg I'm a guy with strong feelings, but this novel made me cry. The ending where they both finally rest in peace and the one where they come back to Axel's school made me shed tears. Loved really hope you make another novel similar to this one.
Reduction of the app in approximately 50 mb
Some corrections to the English translation
Thanks to Logan who helped us in correcting