This Is Where I Want To Die

- November 17, 2013

Everyone 10+

Casual

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Description

This Is Where I Want To Die - A very short kinetic novel (10-15 minutes) about a dying person trying to remember what happened. This Is Where I Want To Die is a depressing story with an important message I want to put across. The game is free to play and I would recommend it for players 16+. TIWIWTD was created in less than a month for NaNoRenO 2013.

Credits:
Story & Characters – Marcel Weyers
Music – Marcel Weyers
Character art – www.all-silhouettes.com, edited by Marcel Weyers
Backgrounds – www.publicdomainpictures.net, edited by Marcel Weyers
Additional graphics – SD Designs
Sound effects – www.freesound.org
Proofreading – SimonLayton, Starwulfen, arachni42, Castielle
Engine – Ren’Py

German translation: Marcel Weyers
French translation: Kevin Cottenie
Spanish translation: Nessy Noinex
Dutch translation: Bob Reus (Visualnovels.nl)
Italian translation: Andrea Luciano 'Lehti' Damico (www.vaporidarsenico.blogspot.it)

Reviews

4.2

475 total

5 309

4 59

3 42

2 15

1 50

Primalsia Blanding

Tragic Yeah since I had read the reviews first everyone kinda spoiled it for me but this was great. It made me almost cry it was pretty sad and tragic. Also...what if Ann likes Brad that'd be even more of a twist. 😣 Ugh. I'm done. Lol.

Jazz X

Good short Great storyline for such a short story. I think the visuals did a great job in interpreting the overall story. The message got me and the end almost brought me to tears. Just goes to show how messed up society can be and how easily happiness and life can be taken away.

Silver Lee

Noble The deed that the wife did for her husband was noble. I wanted to cry at the end of it. It was all so realistic, but one issue that I had on my device was that after the wife said, "This is where I belong," the screen went black. I know that it is supposed to go black for a few seconds, but the app stops responding after that. Please fix, but it was a great book. I would definitely recommend this to anyone (over a certain age, of course).

Yea No

Oh My God... That was the saddest story I've ever read... It was so beautiful... So touching... I wish he could be alive. Its so... Different when you can't see the character. I assumed it was a girl the entire time even when he proposed... Wow... That's so sad and sweet and heartfelt i just loved it so much I could cry...

Fejiro Okagbare

Sooo good made me want to cry This is like the best short story ive evr read, it was sooo realistic and imaginative, I really loved it! Well done ppl ive never read anything like this.. it really takes ur breath away ♡♥♡

Jessie L.

Beautiful This is so sad and beautiful and I'm beyond all words. I kinda knew why the narrator was stabbed when one if the guys said they're disgusting, but I still cried my eyes out when brad said the last line. :'(

User reviews

Primalsia Blanding March 10, 2016

Jazz X April 2, 2014

Silver Lee March 28, 2014

Yea No September 23, 2014

Fejiro Okagbare April 24, 2014

Jessie L. December 24, 2013

Terrie Cooper March 14, 2016

Tear jerking Tear jerking story very very very very good people are jerks I have lots of gay/lesbian friends it's very very very upsetting just knowing that this story is very much true that people have and will kill anyone who is different than them. anyway I recommend that everyone read this.

Dina Droubi July 5, 2014

Amazing. I saw this application and I didnt play it long time becoz I thought its girl-boy relationship. Today I decided to play it and try. At the end, when Brad said "my husband" it hit me harder. Its about the gay relationship. Its touching and sad story. I love it.

Brittany Frazier February 16, 2015

😭😭😭 Okay, so it's not a game, but a short story and one I think everyone should read. So touching. I thought at first it was a waste of time till the end.. beautiful, still in tears 💕

the unblinking queen that you sleep on June 27, 2015

As usual. As usual, Marcel Weyers. I've played the Sleepless Night series on PC and this game on my phone. There's no doubt if the game is very amazing. The writer itself is already amazing :) I look further to your games.

dan de guzman July 23, 2014

WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME D: you need to play this! Just press install. I pretty much knew what it was about, but when the scene happened I was hit with a ton of emotional bricks. TIWIWTD made me tear up right at the sound... even though it's a game it felt weirdly real. Good job to the creator! It's the tops c: -this game will make you want to flip a table

Loli Lux March 31, 2014

Amazing So sad but so beautiful, thank you for making this P. S. Just read through comments, seems not everyone got it. The story is about two guys, not girl and a guy. It reveals it at the end where the boyfriend tells the dying person "... my husband". I guess it also gets pretty obvious during the attack that it's a hate crime. I just wish this was a little longer.

Carol Cabe March 2, 2014

Good It lives up to expectations but I think they could have done more :) @Christopher Seymour, first of all, misspelled*. You think it's gay? They were clearly aiming for mature audience. If you didn't like it, you can keep it to yourself. Also, dreamt is a correct word. Look it up in a dictionary before blabbering about it.

Tan Elaine June 10, 2014

It's creative and really touching The couple was gay right? the casket thing was for gay marriages and the two 'guys' called them disgusting and at the end Brad called the player 'husband'. Its a really good story, though handicapped by the fact there isn't a proper end. What happened after the 'This is where I belong' ? So does the player die and it all ends? But there is no indication of an end nor does the app go back to the menu. Four stars for this it is.

Sarah Heaning July 3, 2014

This is were i want to die It was very short bad grafics the story was ok i like these stories that try to teach kids a point a moral. Wish they had better stories like this one.

Lilly Spaulding April 16, 2014

I cried Seriously a really short story. But I cried a lot and was it a gay couple I think it was because the last part Brad said I will always love you my husband than you die

Tanya S May 18, 2017

When the protagonist keeps talking how everything is "perfect", that's usually a bad sign. So is it in this story. Referring to a box as a small casket cemented it for me. The characters represented by shadow is a good idea to quickly immerse you in the story. Definitely worth a download!

Creamy Smouthy September 5, 2016

I'm speechless... This story is so amazing and so touching... I'm out of words right now! This story touched me deep inside, I really recommend you this game story. Seriously. Please read it up to the end.

Tara Hastie April 10, 2014

Very sad I only realized that brad and the other one was gay half way through i have no problem with gay people at all its sad when that guy killed him i nearly cried there are some really cruel people in this world

Just Me Lol June 10, 2014

That was very sad...but one question...and it's not meant to be homophobic...are they both guys? I'm gonna cry even more if they were. I hate how people treat gays. It's wrong.

Ahmad Fadhel April 12, 2015

Umm so-so. There's nothing special about it, the story is kinda weak. Not even make my heart flatter. But it kinda nice one, so give it a try!

shelly louise June 22, 2014

Though it's a short story, it's a good, heart-felt one. Hopefully, it can make us appreciate the SHORT time (we all have). I'm a writer, & it's NOT easy to make a decent story (line) with one or two sentences at a time to thoroughly get your story/moral across to the reader. Certainly well worth your time.

Zee Yuanji May 12, 2014

Beautiful At first I thought the pov was a girl. Lol. But after he said my husband. It became so sad. Congrats on the good story.

mia v November 14, 2014

Sad.. This was a really nice story. It was very sad though. It made me want to cry, to be honest. You gotta love this app.

WhiteEmerald1991 May 31, 2014

Good I didn't cry but It was a good read. The ending became Confusing but It makes when the relationship Was homosexual.

Emani Velasquez February 15, 2016

Amazing It hit me so hard when she got killed, it hit me even harder when i found out it was a him.Thats when it clicked realized What happened I realized why they said it was disgusting they held hands I was so confused I was like what you never seen anybody hold hands before but when they said I'll always love you my husband I realize that they were judging him because it Was a gay relationship. This goes to show how screwed up society is., this is one of the best visual novels I've ever read.#gaymarriage4life

Diar Monic April 1, 2014

Literally... The best story ever. The love was real. If you change your mind at the last part, you might want to correct yourself 🙆👬💕

Tijana Lukic July 19, 2015

So sad.. This is maybe best thing I read for my entire life.. thank you and make more of these.

Jamille Yomtown October 5, 2015

The Gameplay Is absolutely marvelous! I have thought throughout the game that the player is the female but when Brad said those words that confirmed the characters Identity. Although I never knew the end but all in all it'd just absolutely amazing. 😄😄😄

Akira Leir June 5, 2016

It's so badly delivered it isn't even sad or eye-opening, just sudden and shallow. I seriously can not get why so many people rated this so highly, I mean, "cry" all the way you want, but don't mislead other people into thinking that this is a good piece of work.

Roger Pennie January 12, 2015

Wow 😭 The most saddest story I've ever heard. I'm still crying right now 😭 ~latezya Lilly ~

Tanza Neely December 26, 2013

Sad.... This is so sad I'm starting to cry the end is sad soooo sad this is the best story ever

Jhaedi Ramirez August 25, 2014

? I like it but after she dies my screen is all black i keep touching it but still black does that mean the game end? So i quit trying to touch the screen and i closed the game a few minutes i tried to play again but still no changes wat is hapenng?!

Charles Phillips September 6, 2015

Thank you so much for creating this. It is an incredible gift you have given in what can be a terrible world sometimes

Caitlin Robles December 19, 2014

Important Message Wow. I did not expect that ending... That game really has an important message to it. People really need to be more open-minded and accept others as well as respect them.