This game is possibly the worst out of all the other choice of games I've played. I can endure numerous bugs and mistakes, but the story ends in the most abrupt way imaginable and half of the achievement page comes is made up of a single choice selection where you choose from 20 or so choices which food do you want to eat during a certain meeting. This is quite literally half a scam. I would advise strongly future buyer to NOT buy this game.
Is that it? I know it's a free game, but you'd think it would have a bit more to it than that. I was just getting into the story as well; there were a few grammar mistakes but the story itself was pretty solid. Should be double the length. Disappointing!
Let me start by saying that I am long time player of Choice of Games. I like that they are expanding their truly free games. But, this story seems like it was cut short just as I was getting into it. This game doesn't offer the same sense of queer character creation, and wasn't nearly as compelling. Part of that is how short it is: the actual writing was well done.
It was alright for a free title. Certainly not as bad as I read around here. The ending was anticlimactic though, I got no closure from the one last page.
Congrats mary.not played yet,but i am positive this will be great 😁 really hope you will write another story,i love this. *whine*but whats with the food choices?sooo hungry.lol Last comment,people that are dissing this story,feel free to sumbit YOUR novel yeah? Can you do better??????
Its a good story just felt like it ended a bit short. The journey of the protagonist can be much longer, and a player always wants to see the results of there coices, this game didn't show eny results of the coices you make in the story.The game has a lot of potential just needs some work on an extended ending.