I couldn't bear to read past selecting my name. The writing just... Needs A LOT of work. The story seems promising, but seriously did a 12 year old write this? There were too many typos and improper uses of grammar/punctuation to count.
One of the best cyoa games I played! Fantastic, eerie story with a definite Lovecraftian feeling to it. It's dark, mysterious and intriguing. I recommend it to any mystery horror fans out there!
I expect much better editing from a 100% text based game. It's a shame, because this story seems promising.
I have no words. This is a truly piece of art. You like mistery and Lovecraft? You will not regret it. Worth the money, I enjoyed it too much.
There's no way One can solve the 1st chapter murder case of couple Visit melbury 4 and the cop will hit you with the hammer Doesn't matter how carefully you move he'll be there to kill you
The map moves for everyone else, right? Its not just me??? This is at 20 to 1 in the morning, but please say it aint me.
• Fixed some minor grammar and continuity mistakes.
• Fixed a minor bug in Emilia's House, so that things get to the point.
• Added Checkpoints you can return to after dying.
Find what your strange neighbor is doing in his scary house? In crazy game 2017.