The One and Owenly
The second part of The Human Division its quite a departure from part 1. Yes, it is shorter, but it also has a completely different format and cast. The story takes place as a recording, and thus the entire story is composed simply of dialog. It reminds me of a script for a radio play and thus conversation is the only thing which drives this terse and tense text. It moves quickly and I found myself curious how this portion relates to the previous. I am certain that we shall find out in subsequent releases
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Peter Anargirou
Walk the Plank is very different than The B-Team, the first episode, which I presume Scalzi did on purpose to set expectations. Walk the Plank is written as a transcript rather than in a traditional form. In addition, it’s much shorter, and the story doesn’t seem as satisfying. While the first episode was a great story by itself, Walk the Plank is self-contained but but only decent. If it didn’t exist as part of a larger series, it would be rather boring. On the other hand, it’s more than enough for a chapter in an average novel. As part of a larger whole, it seems to help set up things to come. There are some troubling problems that will likely reappear in later episodes. To be clear, I wouldn’t complain at all if it was simply a chapter in a novel, which is what it is in a way. However, if the The Human Division was compared to a TV series with The B-Team being the double-length pilot, Walk the Plank would would be one of the more out-of-place episodes with its weird format and subpar plot. It was entertaining and served the greater story but just didn’t stand alone as amazingly well as The B-Team. Scalzi's set too high of a bar for himself!
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Andrew Gleich
I was sorely disappointed in this chapter after the first one was so good. As others have mentioned this is much shorter than the first chapter and of a lower quality. It doesn't seem like much time was put into it and has no apparent relevance to the overarching story. I can definitely feel the greedy little fingers reaching into my pocketbook with this one.