
Quinn Calvert
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A decent fantasy story, though the stiff way the MC talks detracts from the story moreso than it sets up comedic gags. Still, it's a well-done OP protagonist story with good supporting characters and an interesting - if rather simplistic - world. Perhaps an artifact of translation, the chain of italicized "power words" used when skills are invoked seem to only loosely follow logic, particularly with the MCs skills often having extra chuni phrases strung in the middle for no real reason.