
Nicholas Rogge
it's good for a bit, before you start realizing that the MC doesn't get any better than he is at the beginning. He's a clueless dick and is just frustrating to read about. The author sometimes goes into another character's POV, and it's better than the MC, but still mostly garbage. Everyone cries at the drop of a hat, it's ridiculous. Seriously, it's like the author has a fetish for it. "Oh I'm soooo smart and cool and anyone I lightly insult cries instantly" type of deal.

richard kissel
started interesting and devolved into simplistic, childish writing. You can skip several chapters at a time without losing any "story". Once you read where he demonstrates killing kobold without being very informative, his depth loses dimension and substance to become a literal child and the girls' stories become more interesting. At this point the dialog becomes a wreck, and loses credibility that there supposed to be real characters speaking, transitioning into speech simply there to tell the same joke over and over and over again.
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Matthew Moorman
I picked up the book because the premise sounded interesting but the author makes no effort to develop the main character. Even with the explanation at the beginning that the skills can effect the person that owns them it doesn't excuse poor character development.