
meme shark
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This tutorial felt goofy, having some non-accurate grammar like: "script: script" and most of the examples shown aren't even examples, those just show where you can find the code. the only actual example I saw, was the egg hatching example in a Roblox sim but other then that I think it was good, to improve I would probably show real examples, instead of where to find the code. And maybe put where to find them in a different area of the tutorial.
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Tristan Folkard
Hey there, Great job on creating this app, it's an impressive feat. however try tinkering around with it a bit more. Fixing the words and images overlapping woul be a great thing. Try sorting all the information and images in frames to makes the reading experience smoother. Then, and then only, you can continue tweaking the information given et caetera. Always do things one at a time. Thanks for the time you've invested in this project of yours, I learnt a thing or two :)

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I don't want to give this a bad start but it seems like it was rushed, it's a little hard to understand what the person wants to say and there are some mistakes in it for example: a LocalScript is a script that is only bound to a specific player and NOT all the players (depends on where you are putting it) <- that is the correct way to say it, in the tutorial it says the SAME THING WHAT THE NORMAL SCRIPT DOES, wich is true but as I said it's ONLY to one specific player... please... update it....
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