
marmar white
It's an interesting story, but you're just supposed to accept being kidnapped and enrolled into training? Also the choices don't feel diverse, a lot of times there are only 2 choices to make and then there are no choices for a long while. My biggest thing is the fact that you're just supposed to be accepting about being taken away, no suspicion, no fighting back, no denial. It just doesn't feel like something anyone would be ok with.

James Taylor
The Storyline & plot are great, but the game seriously needs a major overhaul of proofreading because throughout the entire story there were tons of spelling, grammar, & misplaced word mistakes which very much hampers immersion in the story (not to mention all the mistakes made it seem like a foreign speaking amateur wrote this). This is why I gave it 4 stars instead of 5. This is the only storygame that I've played that was riddled with mistakes.
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A Google user
I'm not going to be too negative since it is free (with ads) but it isnt... Well readable. Premise is fine and all, but the grammar is awful, it follows no literary logic, and is full of spelling errors. Im not sure the writer is particularly fluent in English. But as i said, it is free after all and itll waste some time.
6 people found this review helpful