I think that it was well put together. Giving a little back ground before I go over things, I am pretty astute in this time periods history. Mainly of British. I will now go over the pros and cons. Pros Good storytelling Above average accuracy Cons Rather short Ending was rather underwhelming I have to wait to play because I did not pay a over inflated 5 dollars. One of the better of these games though. Developer please address these issues and I will be happy to make it a higher ranking.

Choices are intense the first time but don't matter as much as I thought. Also the author does a poor job keeping their (probably her) political opinions out of the work, and I often felt like I was punished for my reaction to events and for being a man.

I loved the story and the stats system. Choices went pretty well for me but I got a terrible ending which is kind of annoying when I worked so hard just to have everyone hate me in the end. Ending needs slight improvements.

Pretty decent adventure I enjoyed it , played both as an honourable lowly captain that relies on his charisma and skill in fighting as well as a ruthless cold hearted captain that has earned his position due to his legacy and smarts but punishes his crew for the smallest mistakes. It is set in a world similar to our own so don't expect any magic or sea creatures. My only gripe is the ending , literally a single page. You do x and done thanks for playing.

The game is phenomenal in my opinion. The storyline so great, it is quite lengthy but no too much which adds to the enjoyment as it does not end too soon. The choices are versatile and you really feel immersed in the story. Overall the game is great and I highly recommend

An enjoyable and past-paced read, the author writes with enough skill , that the story is never caught with its "sails unfurelled" Perhaps the only complaint I have is that the length of the game is somewhat underwhelming, however I still recommend it to anybody who enjoys reading. P.S name your character Edward Kenday, its awesome.

The story was interesting at first, but then it seems like it could have been done a much better job to develop it. Maybe it's because of my decision... I don't know for sure. Anyway I didn't like my ending, it was poorly done

Absolutely loved the game, and beat it on the first day. Therein lies the only issue. It was too short. I'd gladly pay premium price for a pirate CYOA that is far longer and more in depth. Aside from that, it was fun and exciting. The devs definitely did their homework. Thanks!

I really liked this game. It was a fun interactive novel and included especial writing. One problem I encounted however, was the ability to shape a character of more choosing from the prologue and beginning chapter. I could not be good at being a leader and have both sailing and combat skills... as an example. It made it difficult having to choose one of the four choices as a imperfect attribute which is stupid. Can I not have a character like Richard Sharpe who is good at everything but money?

Worst Ending Ever How can the writer be so nonchalant about the ending which is the most important part of the story which makes a lasting impact. I feel story falters in romance and ending but regarding a navy life its very good

Amazing! This game not only made me see multiple angles, but I genuinely felt bad for the enemy. Must have.

It ended fairly quickly, the time skips felt too large(three years went by with literally nothing worth noting happening seems kind of unbelievable), but that could just be because of the choices I personally made. Either way, this was amazingly written and done really well. 👍 P.S. You might want to update that whole, purchase the pass so you don't have to wait thing, because mine glitched and I went through it in about 3 straight hours. Just saying.

A fairly decent game. The author should've done more research on colonial era military punishment though because there's a part where you can choose to court martial and hang a crew member for falling asleep on watch during a war while at sea, but the future outcome of choosing to do so is unrealistic. I have it on good authority that back in that time period, the penalty for the above stated offense was death during wartime. Also, it's pretty much impossible to prevent the mutiny from happening on the HMS Defender which is also unrealistic.

Realy Awesome I like it cause you just need to go through ads rather paying and also create a game that the storyline is all base around World War 1

Stupdily tried to impress a 'shy girl' with tales of blood and gore from my past battles. Gosh im an idiot. Sucks the game is so short though...

Truly amazing You don't see very many of these games anymore, and this one is not only a rare type, its amazing. The story is incredible, the gameplay itself is great too. If I could if give it a 6/5 stars.

I wavered between 4 and 5 stars. I ended up at 5 because it is challenging and (similar to real life) your choices are constrained by social expectations. A bit short.

Really short and kind of a boring story. Doesn't really give you a feel for the characters

Nice! Although very similar in places to a certain well known book/movie this is a good story. The writer put some effort in, which is nice. Only thing is its too short, but repeatability makes up for it.

Too short and too big time lapses with no control. More action needed

The story is quite challenging and intense especially to people that are not familiar with sailing and war and such. The choices are pretty intense that change the overall story.

Great story This story was actually a lot of fun. I really hope this story gets a longer version at some point. My only complaint was how short it was.

Really enjoyable but I was disappointed with how short it was. I finished it in a day. I hope the developer extends the story. By well, a lot.

Just wow. First choice game I actually mind reading all the text. Best game ive played so far.

to short could be longer some of the choices don't have much effect on the story wish it told you how many endings there are so you don't have to play the story a thousand times just to figure it out other than that it's a really good story and the whole thing's free (unless you want to buy it ad free)

Need help I payed for this and Uninstalled the game I have reinstalled but now I can get the full game back email me and I will send proof that I have payed for it

Loved it It takes me just one day to finish the story but it's good i-like the flow of the story!!! Keep it up

It's the best This is the best story game I've played so far and the ending was very hard for me since I liked the person...

Amazing I've always loved playing those type of games where you can choose your own choices

Would of rate it more if full version was $2.00 instead of it's high price this is a text based game not a game where you pay for graphics this is easy to make comparing to that.

Great I loved it so intense The choices with vilanueve so good

Free! A game that's actually free, except for the wait time which you can bypass by restarting on the last page

Wow, another liberal coward that puts the choice of being gay or transgender in the game. Pointless.

Couldn't say weather it's good as it crashed on start up.

Amazing game, great story but it could be quite a bit longer and not end with you being told briefly that you become the highest rank and become rich

Obviously written by a radical ideolog. You're punished for "non PC" choices.

Short but fun. Would definitely love to see something longer and more choice heavy. But that's not going to happen.

Better than anything else Best game since Choices by Pixelberry

borrows liberally and shamelessly from other tales but a fun story non the less

It's an ok story I really wish their was more their there. Choice of dragons and the great tournament are both much better