
A Google user
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Well-written, so in that respect it's far better than most interactive text novels. However, it appears that this is a fairly linear plot. The majority of choices lead to very unsatisfying endings. My main grope is that once you're down a path, based on a choice that's about as random as turn left or right, you're dead. Just read another review from a player who has reached far more outcomes than I have, and has yet to achieve a positive outcome.
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Dick Hazard
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Excellent, play throughs are very short and every choice results in a unique outcome (unlike many other books which give you the illusion of choice but eventually guide you to one path or another). Just great story telling too, puts the other choose your own adventure style games (Choice of Games) to shame. Hope to see the author put out more of these.
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I was somewhat impressed with the narrative. The story was pretty descriptive literally, as well as fairly immersive in the mindset of the player character. There were various endings, some rewarding, while others bleak to say the least. This variation on future dystopia was a refreshing change from the often tedious tapestries of other tales. The tone of writing and attention to detail were satisfying, and I especially enjoyed the AC/IB interactions. 46/47 endings found.
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