Rory Long
It's a really cool idea but it had a lot of mistakes particularly involving pronouns. I chose for my love to be male but many times throughout, it would refer to him as a she. Occasionally, he would be referred to as both a he and a she in the same sentence. It felt as if it was not edited carefully. Besides that the story was very interesting and creative, but a little confusing at times. I did enjoy playing it but the pronouns thing was incredibly annoying.
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A filthy casual.
The game overall has a great story and a great plot, but there are some problems. For one, I find that the story can be a bit nonsensical at times, though that might just be due to the rampant misgendering in the text. I mean, I chose for my partner to be male, yet the text keeps going back and forth between male and female pronouns, and there are also a couple spelling mistakes here and there. A good game, but it could use more polish.
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Luca Miller
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The game was decent. The story was very short. It seems like a lot of the things that were necessary were missing. However, the most horrible problem was there are lots of grammar and spelling mistakes, which can make anyone who is learning English confused. I would like to say to focus more on the side story and grammars in the upcoming games.
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