
Rory Long
It's a really cool idea but it had a lot of mistakes particularly involving pronouns. I chose for my love to be male but many times throughout, it would refer to him as a she. Occasionally, he would be referred to as both a he and a she in the same sentence. It felt as if it was not edited carefully. Besides that the story was very interesting and creative, but a little confusing at times. I did enjoy playing it but the pronouns thing was incredibly annoying.
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Killer Rogue
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The game was decent. The story was very short. It seems like a lot of the things that were necessary were missing. However, the most horrible problem was there are lots of grammar and spelling mistakes, which can make anyone who is learning English confused. I would like to say to focus more on the side story and grammars in the upcoming games.
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Lily Andrus
Hey, this was a game that I found to be a bit complecated. Maybe because of the multirace factor. Also, the pronouns confused me a lot. And I think the bot and human relation with the majic combined made less sense when you don't get to choose one side because of the short storyline. The soulmates are also so confusing. At the end it so happens that there's no happy ending or at least an epilogue could be helpful.
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