
Adam Young
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I actually purchased this book. Right when it seemed the story was just getting started it was over. The writing and grammar is good, and the plot is decent. The clockwork soldier and the conflict between Britain and Australia were well done. Where it went wrong was just how fast the plot moves and how short this book actually is. This is probably the shortest choice book available with choice of games.
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I really liked the story and everything but it was too short and i hope you can make more chapters soon
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I wish I could say this was good but it wasn't. The choices you make have little impact on the story, well, they have no impact on the story actually. You're basically a forced spector on this journey.
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