Loved it. Couldn't take my eyes off it. Grammar and words were off or spelled wrong here and there but the story made up for that. Didn't completely like how it ended. I did a whole entire other line because I wanted to figure out if the ending changed but it was just as heart wrenching, if not more because Suma was in danger, I liked Suma's character. It just drew me in. But yeah, all-in-all I think it was pretty great and I wish I could take the ending into my own hands.
I wanted to like it I really wanted to like this game. I'm a huge fan of the choose your own adventure genre of games, and the idea behind this game was very interesting. I just can't reconcile the extremely poor writing with my wanting to like it. Sentences are almost always fragmented and it's clear there was little to no editing done with clear mistakes present throughout. I can not emphasize how much I wanted to push through and enjoy this game, but it became to much and I have to rate it as a 2.
It's okay, but... I read this story before in the forum. I thought there will be more than before but the content was the same. I really loved romance so i was kind of dissappointed with less interaction between romantic options. There weren't many choices that we could choose. I really love the story's concept so i couldn't wait for the sequel. Good luck with your writing!
The story is cool, but there are way too many grammatical errors to make this an enjoyable read. Sentences do not flow well, which breaks up an otherwise great plot. The cliffhanger at the end was unexpected though, which makes me interested in the sequel! At some points, the game feels a little linear in that the same outcome plays out no matter what you choose, which takes a bit of the fun away. Nonetheless, I did enjoy this story - but beta writers and spellchecks would have made the experience a much better one.
Meh It has an interesting story... But its hard to read that story with so many grammatical issues. Wrong words... Misspelled words.... Incorrect sentence structure. Very distracting. The stats seems to have no effect on the game and some stats dont even seem to be usable. Very limited on choices and most of them you can make dont really affect the story.
The horrible grammatical issues and irregualr pacing is NOT someonething you can easily overlook to play this game. Its jarring and will break any sliver of immersion you have. The characters were introduced as no more than cardboard cut outs quite honestly. The romance didnt feel worth it at all. Dont recommend.
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