
Sarah Holman
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I get the impression that the author was a rather young writer who was trying their best, but there's still lots they need to learn. The formatting was completely off. Different characters dialogue was all grouped together instead of separated into paragraphs, and the game would mention characters that I hadn't even met yet. I hope the author keeps writing, but I also hope they try to learn from the mistakes they made with this game.
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L'Onice Abbandonato
There's not enough....depth if that's the word I'm looking for. Spelling errors here and there. I don't know if you are native to the English language, so I'm giving some leniency. Along with the depth, there could've been a longer storyline to see what happens after the conclusion of *SPOILER ALERT* the raids not in the kingdom.
2 people found this review helpful

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The story is just a big no, the character is flat.
2 people found this review helpful