455,000 words of filler After two playthroughs I was very disappointed. They game starts out kind of vague as to what you are (an atom I guess) until you are sent hurling through space as a piece of metal due to a supernova. You can choose what direction you want to go, but that's really it. It's a railed experience. You gain a physical form (and sentience I might add) and rarely make decisions. I ended up on the "Maze" planet, which was annoyingly tedious. To sum it up, don't waste $2.
Very disappointing I have played almost every game released by choice of games and host games and I gotta say this is definitely one of the worst ones. I don't know if the author is new to this or not, but the first few chapters that are free are meant to be the hook, it should make the reader want to continue playing, this opening chapters had the opposite effect. I think one of the biggest problems with this was the subject , playing an literal atom just isn't very entertaining. To the author... sorry, but try again.
It clearly states that you are role playing as an atom. why is everyone btching. you're idiots! this story is unique, only play if you want to role play an atom. DUUUUUUHHHHHH MORONIC EFFES
POV seems weird The premise is very good, but personally I'd like to feel like I'm influencing the fate of a remote iron block rather than being the iron myself.
WTF WHat the hell is this ? I couldn't get myself to read more than 10 pages, swing and miss ! this is wierd, unrelatable and unenjoyable maybe not the worst but certainly one of the worst COGhosted novels I've ever read .
Why?! Who tought playing as an atom in text game would be entertaining? We've played zombies, robots, wizards, what's next? A boring atom. Can't believe I waited 2 weeks for this.