
Filipp
There is a lot of exposition and not a lot of choices. The writing is also somewhat mediocre. It's a shame because I bought this hoping for more. There is screen after screen of writing, followed by a choice or two, followed by more pages of writing. It feels like filler, with poor pacing and action. You could cut the word count in half and still have a better story. I couldn't finish it. Maybe I was just in a bad mood, but I wanted to like it. Just my feelings, I respect the effort to make this

A Google user
The experience in while reading was amazing. You do really get sucked into the story ane can't already wait to see the sequel. I was wondering if you could add a map of the Lord of Aswick World either in a future update or in the sequel. Other than a few grammaritcal mistakes the game is a lot of fun. Keep up the amazing work and already can't wait to see what you have in store for us
25 people found this review helpful

Johnson Pious
Excellent writing, lengthy story, your choices matter in the story. One big fault however is that the save function just doesn't work. It is very annoying to not be able to load previous saves and have to restart from the beginning after having made a mistake. To the maker of the game I would suggest having a look at another cyoa game called Magium, it's save functionality is quite good. Overall great game, chefs kiss/10
7 people found this review helpful