Look I really wanted to love this. The story seemed good and the characters were good but the grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere... I just couldnt finish it. Every single one threw me out of the story. If youre going to make a game that is SOLELY based on text then you really need to make sure that text is up to scratch.
Some of the most piss poor writing I've experienced in a while. Even if you ignore the technical issues, like bad grammar and misspellings, the author often just leaves out information, or just completely underwhelms you with every aspect of the world they try to create. So boring.
I tried to like this. The story was pretty interesting, but the grammar and spelling errors made it nearly impossible to finish. I can excuse a couple of typos here and there, mistakes happen, but this was clearly never proof read. If all the errors were fixed, this game might be pretty decent.
This is a good story but the grammar in this is so incorrect. It throws you out of the game. At some points you're like, "okay, it's the aliens trying to speak with the humans." But when the narrator makes this mistake for ex. "Meatwall whispers something into Valkyrie's year", then you know the writer didn't complete editing. Also the stats system is SOOOO incomplete.
The story had potential to go somewhere, but it threw you into a world expecting you to be able to grip everything easily. The writing completely ruined that, from grammar errors to sentences not even making sense, it shot itself down. For being free with ads, I didn't expect something too great considering it's length, but was more disappointed than I imagined. It could have been better, really.
A short read with an abrupt ending. Too many writing mistakes as well. Also, the concept had a very rich potential but the characterization, storytelling, and the story itself all failed to deliver. Stats aren't that well-defined too, and some parts are lacking and bordering on problematic in terms of progressive writing.
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