It was kinda corny in a few ways but was also sweet. I am pleased that it was possible to get the happy ending and save whoever possible all the while not dying. It was a nice story with a, in my opinion, satisfying end
Dont download youll regret it The people who made this probably thought an immersive story is thousand of words that made such cringe worthy plot i dont even feel involved with the chararcters. They try to make it feel like a play but instead it just made the story more cringy and the 3rd person point of view destroyed the story the moment it started ,its like im playing a dating sim game then a game book about love, good and darkness
I Wanted To Like This But... Seriously, I was excited when this popped up on the site, because I'm a sucker for a good romance. But it was just such a horrible thing to slog through. Writing was TERRIBLE-- third person kills immersion for me. I could've tolerated it, but on top of that, there are just so many grammatical errors and clunky, overwrought sentences. Plot was confusing, story was railroaded... all in all, a mess.
I loved it... But it is unique I think that some parts are corny and not fully thought out. But the rest of the story was really fun to read (could really use work on spelling corrections though).
I loved this game Granted, at this it's a litte confusing, but it's good nonetheless. I really wish it was longer, though. Here's hoping for a sequel!
Not involved I don't feel connected to these characters at all. I get the feeling I'm not wanted here in the story. A no from me.