Just couldn't get into it. It's really disjointed and jumps all over the place. Also most of the options at the beginning gave you no choices at all. Lame when compared with others of it's genre.
Thanks. It was ok. Went through really fast. Overall pretty boring though.
Solid, not stellar Pardon the pun in the title. This is a fairly solid cyoa, though the choicescript stats can be a little transparent and I felt little to no investment in the actual story. I didn't see the same grammar issues as other people--though some of the puns included are a little subtle and perhaps easily mistaken for mistakes. I liked it, I would play a sequel, though I am not itching for one.
Disjointed Story jumped from scene to scene without smooth transitions, especially near the end. I guess the testers didn't pick the options I did, but I often found myself in situations without knowing how I got there. Also, some of the ads played audio, which wouldn't stop even when I opened up another app.
• New UI.