Close — you fixed the core promise, but four things in this draft still need surgery before you hit Save:
1. Day inconsistency (new problem): line 1 says "every Week" but line 2 shouts "EVERY WEDNESDAY!" — pick one. Recommendation: "EVERY WEEK" in both spots. Wednesday-as-deadline was for Cooper's expectations; printing the specific day in a store listing recreates the Monday problem with a new day. "Every week" can't be broken by an early Tuesday publish or a late Thursday one.
2. Em-dashes still present (3): lines 1, 3, and the AI-CHECKED paragraph.
3. Grammar: "Works with QuickBooks Online your books stay yours" — missing separator.
4. Capitalization: "every Week" → "every week."
Corrected full description — paste as-is:

FinAcct360 is the financial operating system for restaurant owners. Accounting done for you, explained simply, delivered every week.
YOUR NUMBERS, EVERY WEEK!
See sales, profit, food cost, labor and prime cost for every week. Accurate, tied to your books, and explained in plain English. No spreadsheets, no waiting until month-end.
A REAL ACCOUNTANT, IN YOUR POCKET
Every FinAcct360 client gets a dedicated accounting team. Message your accountant, answer quick questions, approve fixes, and upload documents straight from your phone.
AI-CHECKED, ACCOUNTANT-APPROVED
Our platform reviews every ledger for miscodings, missing entries and unusual amounts, and a professional accountant approves every number before you ever see it.
BUILT FOR RESTAURANTS

Weekly financial reports and health score
Prime cost, food cost % and labor % against industry benchmarks
Monthly deep-dives: expenses, vendors, cost trends
Month-end inventory counts that turn food cost into an actual, not an estimate
Works with QuickBooks Online. Your books stay yours.

FinAcct360 is for restaurant owners with an active FinAcct360 subscription. New here? Visit finacct360.io to see a live demo and get started.