Jillian C
I dislike leaving bad reviews, but I'm really surprised this is a hosted game, as it doesn't read/ play like something from an experienced author. I'm amazed they've left it up. While not terrible, there really is no choice or branching paths. Picking anything other then the correct option results in death, and not all choices are well explained. The endings I found weren't very satisfying or well written. The author has some potential, but this isn't it. Feels short, low effort and illogical.
5 people found this review helpful
Bradley Hutto
This is really not that great of a game. It is supposed to be "choice based" but if you pick the wrong choice you die. It is to short and is just straight forward. It took me around 5minutes to read the whole thing. It really did have the potential to be a good came if you would of put more effort into it.
10 people found this review helpful
Kendris Krupnow
Weird and Poorly Written I honestly don't know what this game was meant to be. The writing feels so ditached and weird and nothing has any emotional impact. The first scene is like "Oh, my Mom died. That sucks a little but oh well. Time to make new friends." Was the main character's mom a really bad person or is the main character just that messed up? Because it seems like they are a really weird person tbh. Honestly, I will never finish this game. It's just that bad.