James Taylor
The Storyline & plot are great, but the game seriously needs a major overhaul of proofreading because throughout the entire story there were tons of spelling, grammar, & misplaced word mistakes which very much hampers immersion in the story (not to mention all the mistakes made it seem like a foreign speaking amateur wrote this). This is why I gave it 4 stars instead of 5. This is the only storygame that I've played that was riddled with mistakes.
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marmar white
It's an interesting story, but you're just supposed to accept being kidnapped and enrolled into training? Also the choices don't feel diverse, a lot of times there are only 2 choices to make and then there are no choices for a long while. My biggest thing is the fact that you're just supposed to be accepting about being taken away, no suspicion, no fighting back, no denial. It just doesn't feel like something anyone would be ok with.
Codex7777
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A lot of these reviews are being very unfair. It's an excellent game and an excellent story. One of the best cyoa games imho. Yes there are spelling and grammatical errors but you get used to them and the story MORE than makes up for it. Most of the people complaining appear barely capable of writing a coherent sentence themselves, ironically. To those saying that you only get access to one type of magic, you're wrong. Access to the various types of magic is dependent on your choices.
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