reviewed by Mihir Shah
"Some say you need a gun to fight
but no you really donât
Instead you need your God above
with Him there is your might."
In A War of Love, William T. Elliott seeks a therapeutic reprieve from nagging panic attacks, but instead ends up capturing the essence of the human spirit through a series of timeless, evergreen poems revolving around prayer, philosophy, nature, and animals. With no clear structure or rhythm, A War of Love wonât be mistaken for an Edgar Allen Poe or Sylvia Path piece; however, the stream of conscious style that Elliott exudes in his work has a genuine, heartfelt aura that will likely resonate with individuals of all ages.
Although the poems are split into six sections, including the compilationâs namesake, Elliottâs observations on animals remain consistent throughout. Four consecutive poems, âTHE BEAGLE,â âA CAT,â âTHE CHICKADEE,â and âTHE DEER,â grace the opening of the collection and establish a romanticization of everyday animals. What makes these poems sparkle is the elimination of age appeal. In âA CAT,â young or old can reminisce fondly on the memorable temperament of a cat that, âgives me not a nod at all,â unless it is feeding time. In âTHE HAWK AND THE BLACKBIRD,â like in the poems above, there is unique energy in the authorâs writing style and pace that matches the animalsâ love of life that Elliott successfully portrays. Perhaps the most intriguing poem, appearing in âAdditional Poems,â is âTHE BUTTERFLY.â In a matter of five quatrains, the poet injects the reader with childhood nostalgia. The poem itself is emblematic of coming of age: Children are in their own cocoon, and when they become adults, they too, like a butterfly, fly away.
Elliott adds a distinctly personal touch to his words by including personal photographs, none more riveting than the picturesque landscapes of Angostura Reservoir and Coldbrook Dam in South Dakota. This ode to nature is in full form in âTHE MISSOURIâ and âTHE SNOWFLAKE,â both poems that use mother nature and imagery of all five senses to reinvigorate the human spirit and help readers remember what it really means to be alive, be it hearing âthe waves that wash upon the sand,â or âthe feel of flakes past chilly ears.â While Elliott appears to be focused more on evoking a particular emotion from the reader rather than spectacular structure, his poem, âTHE SNOWFLAKE,â exhibits an abundance of strong structure, repetition, and simile that allows the readers to conjure the image of snowflakes falling like âcotton tuffsâ in the day and âdandruffâs spiteâ in the night.
As the poetry progresses, so does Elliottâs depth of observation. While the poems on animals and nature dwell on what is apparent to the eye, his thought-provoking philosophy poems touch on many of the worldâs âelephant in the roomâ topics that most try to avoid. Poems like âLoneliness,â âFrustration,â and âHope,â discuss the struggle man faces throughout lifeâs journey, while âPipe Dreamsâ seeks to keep readers grounded and avoid the sometimes inevitable delusions of grandeur that find ways into oneâs thoughts. âDEATH OF A THOUGHT,â however, stands on its own and represents the metaphysical element of time, inciting a debate of whether one should wait for the right moment to act or simply seize the moment.
Directly or indirectly, A War of Love seeks to infuse the reader with life and love that is ultimately actualized with prayer. Poems like âPRAYER,â and âPEACEâ are indicative of the hope that prayer brings, but âWAR OF THE SPIRITâ is not only representative of prayer, but, from a subjective point of view, is central to the compilation and renders spirit and love as synonymous.
There are numerous other poems that donât necessarily fit in a category mentioned above, though that is hardly a knock on their ability to captivate. Both âTHE DELICATE KISSâ and âHOW TO GET ALONG WITH A WOMANâ share the spirit of intimate love with legendary poems like âWhen You are Oldâ by literary behemoth, William Butler Yeats.
A War of Love will fall short for those who are looking for precision with meter, pinpoint use of literary devices, and poetic perfection. For poetry aficionados who are looking for an authentic voice and heartfelt poetry that drives home the meaning of being alive, A War of Love is a pleasurable endeavor.
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WILLIAM ELLIOTT was born on September 23, 1951, in Fort Bragg, North Carolina. During his childhood, he was interested in baseball. He was also interested in science. He won fi rst prize in a science fair for building a Geiger counter. He had a paper route as his fi rst job. He was in junior high school when desegregation took place. He remembers playing baseball in his neighborhood with both African American and Caucasian children. In 1966, William and his family moved to Hot Springs, South Dakota. His family consisted of his mom, dad, three sisters, and one brother. He completed his high school education in Hot Springs. During high school, he was athletic and was involved in track and fi eld. He graduated from high school in 1969. After high school, William took two years of college at Northern State College. Then in 1972 he joined the air force. He was primarily stationed at Altus Air Force Base in Altus, Oklahoma, and Lackland Air Force Base in San Antonio, Texas. He was honorably discharged from the air force in 1975. William completed his BS degree in environmental science in 1977. During college, he met Nancy Rempfer, whom he married in June of 1976. He later completed a masterâs in business administration from the University of South Dakota in December of 1984. His work experience includes being a health inspector for the state of South Dakota; a business manager for the Cheyenne River Community College in Eagle Butte South Dakota; a business and computer instructor at Little Hoop Community College in Ft. Totten, North Dakota; taught small business management at National American University in Rapid City, South Dakota; then took a position at Oglala Lakota College teaching computer science and business, on the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation in South Dakota. He retired from teaching in 2008. William became interested in poetry while experiencing health issues and found it to be therapeutic. After retirement, he took his poetry to the next level. He recently took two fi rst place and one second place awards at the Veterans Creative Arts Festival in the Black Hills Regions. His insight of his surroundings is both humorous and inspiring.