Melvin Ward
So many grammatical errors like "try with a juice green pear". Pretty sure they mean try a juicy green pear. If you are going to write a book for kids then learn how to speak English. My child read this book exactly how you wrote it so lets not raise a generation of idiots please. Thank you.
Aundria Blatch
The story was great. However, some of the pages were missing words and/or had misspelled words. Teaching the children to read.....this should be fixed.
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Dark sis & bro
Ok story but started to make no sense at the end do not read with children learning to read just confuses them