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meredith hawkins
Oh where to start... Ok to begin with, it English isn't your first language, find an editor to look over your essay so that you don't come off looking like a fool. Secondly, if you're going to an essay on the Fifty Shades of Grey saga, at least sit down and read the books to completion. AND research the material that it is based on. Such as the BDSM sub-culture. You might just find that it isn't anything like what you've depicted in your essay. Such as I have never found the S-types to have low self esteem that has been created by their D-type. If anything the low-self esteem issues have come from those people that claim to live a "Godly Normal Life" The toys are cleaned after every use, and once are what's termed fluid bound are used for that person only. Safe sex is practiced with more aplumb than the random high school/university hooks ups. And had you read the book, you would have seen that both Ana and Christian had a signed contract that they both negotiated. There were hard limits and soft limits (Hard limits are strict no go areas while a soft limit can be renegotiated) Third and Finally, if you aren't a theology major then don't try to interpret the writings in the bible. Nine times out of ten you will fail miserably because the meaning of the words have been mistranslated numerous times. And translations have been made to fit the era of when they were done and by whichever power was in charge at the time.
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Ashlyn Rasmus
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so...what I can gather from this is; you feel that people who prefer to enjoy life without Christ in every single part of it are Satanic. Okay. I, as a Christian, enjoyed the novels. The movies were disappointing but that's expected since they can't put everything in. These novels were meant for groups who enjoy such novels, nobody is forced to read it. People who read it finished and gave great reviews are the reason it was a bestseller, they weren't forced to give good reviews. Your grammar and spelling was also a big problem for me, I'm in my last year of highschool and even I can't deal with the grammar. Yes my family is Christian, yes I am too like I said. But I see nothing Satanic, just two people indulging in their innermost desires and love for each other. Something else that proves that there's nothing Satanic going on is when you read the second book after Christian is thought in danger. Anna talks about God and going to church. I've run out of letter so🙃✌ please fact check
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William Smith
Yeah it's free. But even that is to expensive. He should have to pay people to read this ridiculous, confusing garbage. This is either the worst translation I've ever seen or a case of someone trying to write in a language he obviously barely understands. I didn't like fifty shades ( the movie) but accusing it of being satanic ( which I guess is what he's doing) is as retarded as calling Harry Potter satanic or calling a teletubby gay. What a moron.
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