Ashwini Balnaves
I found the writing style hard to read. The dialog is contrived and the paragraphs seem jolted. I can't comment on the plot. I didn't get past the prologue and chapter 1. If you like reading the kind of fiction written by a high school student, you'll love this.
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Chuck Dickson
An interesting storyline and a different idea. Totally implausible however, if you've ever seen the size of hole any firearm makes, then all this shooting with weapons up to .50 cal is unlikely to be in any way possible. I know it's a story, but...
Tee Jay Simmons
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From the first page I speed read through each chapter and book. Very well written and easy to get caught up in. I loved every minute and scorned being done with them. Awesome read!