Kyle Christy (thekeelo_g)
There are no shocks here for anyone who has read the first three volumes, but the story is at least going somewhere. The writing remains, let's be generous and say uneven, and if a proofreader was paid to look this over, they've gotten away with the crime of the century. The complaints about the pricing scheme are valid, and if this was sold as a single novel, which it very blatantly is, or even as a duology, it would be a little easier to swallow. None of the volumes work as a standalone book, and they don't even bother to end on a proper cliffhanger, other than the story not being complete. That said, I bought this after catching the first three volumes for free, so obviously it works at least to some degree. It probably says all that needs to be said that upon finishing this volume, I wished I hadn't started at all rather than anticipating the next volume.
Chris Patterson
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Frightening.........Are the American police really that incompetent? The writing is awful, almost childish. These books are so drawn out one assumes it's pulp fiction to make money. Turgid, shallow, two dimensional rubbish. I waded through four books, hoping it would get better (drawn in by the fact that volume one was free) then gave up. Mindless, inane claptrap. Poorly researched, poorly written. I'm going to stick a pencil in my eye as punishment for throwing good money after bad. Would rate it zero stars but have to give a minimum of one. One redeeming feature.......good for insomniacs. I assume the other reviews are written by simpletons or the author or maybe they read something different
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