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[Basic:girl&boy meet; part; girl&boy reconcile] kernal of good story, sadly-lost, inside "untidy" trash-novel.Hands of skilled writer would've developed it with panache (into a finely- polished glittering gem.)If one can just gamely slog thru poorly constructed syntax, bad grammar, incorrect vernacular, and choppy plot progression, and patchy writing... one can admire a fine hero/heroine duo who deserved far better treatment. ...better than the extraneous trashy scenes which proved distracting.
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K Lee
The story was nice and short--not drawn out like most others. The characters were okay, though felt that things were a little rushed (that's usually the case with romance novels). Fun story, good read.