Chun Keat Chin
It's a pretty good read. I spotted one or two misspelled word near the beginning, but other than that everything seems to work just fine. I enjoy the fact that the story progresses in both expected and unexpected ways. The main character herself is so deeply flawed that it's interesting to see how she breaks and reforms, as well as the undertone that the core members of her party are threatening to crack under pressure, but she seems utterly clueless about it. Villain perspective is pretty cool too, especially when his thought process sounds like he's transforming into a Sith or something. There maybe a little too much 'magic' and not enough sci-fi/futuristic stuff in the story, but I suppose Somnia Online is a game with a fantasy background. I don't know if this will be a trilogy or longer than that, but I look forward to the next book regardless. Keep up the good work!