Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World

Kei Sazane

Apr 2021 · Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World Vol 6 · Sold by Yen Press LLC

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SISTERS AT WAR

With Iska’s unit at her side, Sisbell races against the clock, desperate to return to the palace and uncover who was behind the violent coup. However, when Elletear catches wind that Sisbell’s new guards are enemy soldiers, she hatches a little plan to thwart her sister’s earnest attempt to save their troubled country. In fact, Elletear’s best bet is caging Sisbell and her new guards in the family villa to keep them out of the way of her schemes. Meanwhile, petrified that Elletear might hurt their youngest sister, Alice scrambles to the scene…forcing all three siblings to come together under one roof for the first time in a long while.

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Unfortunately this has become another failed Japanese story! They start so full of promise in book one by the end of book three the reader begins to wonder what happened. I went on to book six but never a seven! The story is in complete failure mode now very much needing a complete rewrite of book 6 and probably will need to include 4 and 5 and that's where this story starts... Heck! The story has stopped progressing since late in the second book. Sisbell and Elletear were supposed to increase the scope of the story. However the interaction between Iska and Sisbell is just off! When they meet up again there is no history between them. Then everyone knows Elletear is the traitor but no one will say it! Heck, Elletear is supposedly in Empire while she is away and yet no one knows it?! Needless to say everything else is explained worst after that point, and the reader is still left with half the book still left to read! One paragraph that occurs in two different locations in the book except the author left out the most acceptable / understandable conclusion to it: Alice to Elletear at either at train station or villa, "Mom sent me to bring back to Sisbell to the palance." Emphasis her: "Her direct order!" (Most societies that is a written order too... Also left out in this crazy fantansy world!) Elletear says, "No you can't... " (Leftout conclusion) Alice cuts off Elletear, "You are under arrest for breaking a direct order from the Queen!" Please realize that in empires or kingdoms that is usually ends in death!!! Needless to say book six was a complete waste of my time!!! Where's the editing team on this one?! They completely failed on multiple occasions to bring this back from disaster! Here's a personal note to the author you introduce the first scene in book one and I am at the end of book six with no rhyme or reason for why you portrayed it there... Now think of the worst curse ever and that's for just you!

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