Inevitable Destiny: Part 1

Kelly Black

Jul 2013 · Kelly Scheiner

About this ebook

A suicidal girl travels with her parents to Israel, only to discover that she is not human and the world is about to end. 

Ratings and reviews

It has a good storyline and plot but some of it just didn't make sense, I would say that's from all the mistakes through out the book. It's futuristic and makes sense with how the world seems to be heading, but its not so far in the future that you have to stretch your imagination to grasp it. The romance side of this story just wasn't there for me I would have liked to see the relationship blossom more than it did and for him to help her find the truth hope the author ties up the loose ends

I READ THE BOOK AND IT WAS SIMPLE TO READ, YET COMPLICATED TO UNDERSTAND. ITS EASIER TO UNDERSTAND THE STORY, IF YOU ARE FAMILIAR WITH CHRISTIAN OR JEWISH RELIGIOUS STORIES FROM THE BIBLE. I HAD TO FACT CHECK ALL THE STORIES THAT WERE USED THROUGHOUT THE BOOK. AFTER I WAS DONE, I FELT IT WAS A GOOD, EDUCATING READ AND I DEFINITELY LEARNED A LOT.

The author has a great idea unfortunately it just isn't well developed. This book feels like it needed a better/more editting. There are inconsistencies, spelling, errors, and poorly constructed sentences throughout.