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James Evans
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brutal writing. An author should never proofread their own work. I stopped reading after a few chapters because the errors were too much. One star is too much. Perhaps things would be different if more care were taken to produce a quality product.
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Cheryl Fankhauser
The terrible translating and typo's spoiled this book for me. Instead of enjoying the story I found myself getting angry with the grammar and poor English, and spending time correcting..... It loses stars because of this. Good potential otherwise .
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Nil Forever
There is a surprise at every turn. All my guesses turned out to be wrong which is rare. All the characters are convincing and real life. The end is very touching. Yeah i loved the book and hope the author finds some good editors for her next ones!
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