Melvin Ward
So many grammatical errors like "try with a juice green pear". Pretty sure they mean try a juicy green pear. If you are going to write a book for kids then learn how to speak English. My child read this book exactly how you wrote it so lets not raise a generation of idiots please. Thank you.
wendy Spackman
Bad grammar and pages went blank 3/4 of the way through. The story wasn't all that great anyway....at least it was free.
Laura Pelofske
This book has glaring copy errors and the story is odd, but my daughter likes to hear it every night, so I'm glad I downloaded.
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