Don Sheppard
Excellent story. Dialog could've been a little crisper, but all the subplots meshed nicely. A bit heavy on the profanity, and I understand an author needs to make it realistic. But I was very disappointed with the lack of respect given to our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Taking HIS Name in vain was not at all necessary. Good luck to you, sir with your future endeavors.
Glenn H
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Great story. Good character building. But like action movies these days, the fight scenes are long winded and confusing. Maybe in the authors mind eye it makes sense. I tend to skip through pages until the fight is over which is a shame as l miss little nuggets of the story. I still highly recommend this series. Keep up the good work.
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