Hot Billionaire Delivered

Melody Love

So Hot Billionaires Book 13 · Ownit Publishing LLC

About this ebook

He’s just returned from serving his country, something he always dreamed of doing. Now he struggles with PTSD and still wonders about the mysterious letters while he received when he was serving. Who was this woman who continued to send him encouraging letters and gifts and what was her purpose?

Morgan continues to deal with the grief of losing her big brother Ray to the war. Her best friend and protector is gone and she wants to live out his legacy by continuing to support the troops. So when his best friend is deployed again, she knows she has to send him letters and packages, but she can’t let him know who it is. Now he’s home and she is dying to run into him. His letters back to her made her fall in love with him.

Ratings and reviews

The author clearly has not researched or had any experience with military operations. it is also very insulting to refer to the people where the first chapter was set as just "Asian". Pick a country, there are MANY countries IN Asia, name them appropriately. Spelling and grammar errors were jarring and appeared too often to believe this was edited by anyone close to professional. Repetitive phrases and lack lustre story telling added to my boredom. Did we really need to know every action, every step the characters made? DNF

I was disappointed in all the spelling errors in the book; just a few instances: theiving room,( living room), wine for mine, other for mother, hip for Chip, organ for Morgan and many more! other than that it was a pretty good story.

The story was good and could have been a wonderful book. The writing was sophomoric. Every thing was "excellent " or "great" or "wonderful " . There wasn't much reality in it. Please keep writing and work on the story. Thank you for this book.