Flovely - Adventures on the Houseboat

Siegfried Freudenfels

Feb 2019 · BookRix

About this ebook

"Flovely – Adventures on the Houseboat" is a lovingly written children’s book for children from three to six. The cheerful adventure story tells of an exciting outing on a boat with Flovely and her friends. Positive character traits like friendship, team spirit and trust are essential in the story and are conveyed to the children playfully.

Together with her friends Flovely makes an adventurous boat trip on the rainbow river. As a team the friends repair the old houseboat, make new friends and build a great pirate’s camp at a wonderful beach. During an exciting hike in the night the adventurers watch the animals of the forest and afterwards have a glittering feast round the camp fire. Discover the free children ́s books.

Ratings and reviews

I've only read the first cupple of pages and thought as others have said the grammar is not of the best it may help readers if they read it in a Welch accent . I think that it was written as the writer speaks if it's not with a Welch accent then please expect my apologies . Easy to be critical if you have never written Anything

The typos and the questionable grammar were far too distracting while I was trying to read it with my niece. If you can ignore the typos, then the story is okay, but if you have trouble reading typos and choppy flowing sentences, I would pass on this.

This is a poorly written story, unfortunately. It has not targeted a reading level, with the language being used and the concepts in the story being mismatched for young readers. Maybe a rewrite is required. Good luck!