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The numerous grammar and punctuation issues, all of the run on sentences and the continued use of the main character's full name made me put this book down a third of the way through. Having what seemed like a plot written by a seventh grade student want helping either. Sorry, but this one's a miss.
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Sarah Moles
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It had a very good plot to it, but there were quite a few simple grammatical errors. It was very repetitive saying "Anthony Stone" over and over, which was annoying. There's a lot of potential for this book to become great and something I would even pay for. The author could have gone into more detail to provide more of a visual to captivate the reader. This was a very good read for being a free book. They could have expanded on many things to make chapters longer and not make it so choppy and abrupt. The ending was abrupt, made it seem like the author was rushing to finish the book. I really like this book.
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Tina Kalliola
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The author is writing the characters names again & again & again & again..you get the picture. It drove me nuts. If I didn't have to put up with that, I may have read more than 3 pages. Seriously, what author believes they have ro write the name of the character before or after every single action & thought
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